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Satin and Steel:
The Books of Blood and Fire
Book 2.
“You will not find
the demon hunting in plain sight down there on Broad Street, ma cherie.”
Rhiannon spun,
hand on her katana. Leaning casually against the shadowed side of the
chimney-stack, there stood a tall, wild-looking woman. She wore hunting
leathers, like Rhiannon, and a flowing white pirate’s shirt. When the woman grinned, Rhiannon saw the
fangs in her winning smile… though she needn’t have seen that to know what she was looking at.
“Oh, silly me,”
the creature purred. “Perhaps it is you who are hunting Broad Street? Were you searching for a throat to feed
on? I am quite sorry if I have
interrupted…”
“Shadiil,”
Rhiannon muttered, easing out of her defensive lunge. “Who invited you here?”
“Councilwoman
Sable, but of course.”
The
shadow-walker crossed through the
darkness, appearing in the shadow of the chimney-stack. One of the unsettling
birthrights of their ancient race: they passed through the space . It had allowed her to sneak up on Rhiannon
unheard, and that set the vampire on edge.
She turned away from the beast-demon for one last glance down at the
street and then at the building across from them, wondering from what direction
the creature had come.
“You are the
infamous Rhiannon, yes?” the pretty demon asked. “Our War-mistress Jade told me you have been
sent here by Councilwoman Donovan.”
“Yes,” Rhiannon
bristled. “And of course I’m sure you
know why.”
The shadiil woman waved a hand. “It is nothing we cannot handle, no?”
“We?”
She brought her
attention back to her visitor, giving the smug feline creature a skeptical
glance. “I’m not sure what Councilwoman
Sable thinks I am here to do, but it isn’t to tag along with her little
errand-girl.”
The shadiil tilted
her head playfully to the side. They
were inexorably mischievous, children of the Third Race. Rhiannon threw one last glance at the street
below, decided there was little chance of anything interesting happening
without her notice, and shifted to face the other demon fully.
“Who are you?”
“My name is
Vivienne,” the demon purred, extending one hand as though she expected Rhiannon
to kiss it. “Enchenté.”
Rhiannon brushed
it aside. “You’re one of Jade’s
assassins, then?”
“Oui.
My own pride is in Haiti, but I have been here in Europe for some years
serving the Councilwoman and her sister.
Jade had me in France until just a few days ago, when she asked me to
come here and help the local prides with this… little problem.”
“France is not a
great place to be from right now,” Rhiannon muttered. She looked up the slope of the roof, and
quickly snuck to the top, looking over the other side towards High Street.
“Non,” Vivienne agreed. “And I am happy to have been reassigned. France and her intrepid little emperor are so
exceedingly boring.”
“Boring?” Rhiannon
mused. “Interesting choice of words.”
“You are very
fidgety, ma cherie.”
She gave the
creature a humorless glance, and crossed her arms over her chest.
“We were neither
of us sent here to make small talk or exchange useless pleasantries,” she
said. “So feel free to move along and go
hunt some other corner of the city, kitty.”
Vivienne’s
expression softened, becoming thoughtful and smug.
“Are you as
bigoted as your arrogant beast of a mother, then, kin-born?”
“I already have
enough hunting partners on my hands as it is and I have no interest in saddling
myself with another,” Rhiannon replied.
“Your race has little to do with it.”
“Little,” Vivienne
purred. “But not nothing.”
Rhiannon kept her
expression implacable, but she said nothing to the contrary.
After long
moments, Vivienne looked away from her with a soft smile, idly strolling in an
aimless pattern beneath the shadow of the chimney.
“It really is a
shame you will not consent to hunt with me,” she murmured. “I am very keen to hear the stories of the
low-born birth-slut who is slated to become the most powerful vampire of her
race.”
Rhiannon
snorted. “You’ve heard some pretty
ridiculous rumors, beast-demon, or else you are taunting me. Either way I find it less than entertaining.”
Those green eyes,
glowing with smoky, iridescent light, flashed coquettishly up at her.
“The shadiil
nation is rooted in deep, powerful magic,” she purred. “Our prides have plumbed the depths of the
primal spirit world, ma cherie, have
run with the ghosts and phantoms, seen the things that exist only in the
darkness and when no-one is looking.”
In a blink, the
demon was gone, disappeared into the silhouette of the smoke-stack. Then, with slow coyness, Rhiannon felt the
feline’s slender fingers brushing up against her shoulder, and she spun to find
the woman lounging happily on her stomach atop another chimney, slipped there
through the shadows without a sound.
“What we have
heard about you,” she said, “is far from
ridiculous rumor.”
Rhiannon jerked
away from her.
“Don’t touch me,
beast-demon.”
The corner of
Vivienne’s smile twitched, for a moment becoming hard, an irritated scowl.
“Your race was only fourth in the Drogh
Lord’s kingdom,” she hissed. “The
werewolves and shadiil came long before
vampires. We are older than even the
oldest of your kind, gravespawn, something you and your mother would do well to
keep in mind.”
“Older than
bloodsuckers, but still the spawn of beasts,”
Rhiannon spat. “And rife with a touch of
madness because of it, I’d say.”
Vivienne was
silent, looking Rhiannon over with carefully assessing eyes.
“They say you have been mad once,” she said
quietly.
Rhiannon’s spine
straightened a little; a wary prickle went through her shoulders and a low
growl started deep in her throat.
“Drank the blood
of another vampire, didn’t you?” the shadiil purred. “Drained a rival warrior to death, just like
a rabid thrall demon does, and lost your pretty little mind.”
The growl turned
into a snarl, and Rhiannon’s hand went once again to the hilt of her blade as
she backed away.
“You haven’t
exactly been the same since then, have you, Rhiannon Donovan?”
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Excellent dialogue, suspense and imagery. I read every word as fast as I could, desiring the consequences of their interaction. You have written a tense yet beautiful tale. I hope this continues.
ReplyDeleteWonderful visuals and great dialogue. It's a great taster a real hook to read the whole story
ReplyDeleteAgain, great dialogue, images, pace and tension. Very imaginative!! xo
ReplyDeleteYou know how to draw in a reader. I enjoyed this great taster.
ReplyDeleteI agree on the ratcheting tension. Very nice!
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